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SubRosa
06-12-2004, 08:39 AM
Return the Favor

return the favor
turn and face her
its been way too long
you fought so long

return the favor
cartons of oxygen
morphine pneumonia sin
its been way too long

return the favor
its gonna be clear soon
the fog will clear soon
you fought so long

IJR

SubRosa
06-12-2004, 08:46 AM
this is for my grandfather who recently passed from lung cancer.

Moonjava
06-13-2004, 05:09 AM
Very touching and powerful. You should share some more!
Peace,
Moonjava

borut16
06-13-2004, 07:06 PM
Very touching and powerful. You should share some more!
Peace,
Moonjava I agree!

Love,
Borut

Fierce_Flawless
06-13-2004, 10:44 PM
before i read that first coment i was thinking "that reminds me of my grandfather" (he died of lung complications.) very moving. that takes me back to when i first learned what the majority thinks dying means, and reminded me that abandonment is in every instance a gift.

so beautiful.