The only poem i ever kept

[SubRosa]

Return the Favor

return the favor
turn and face her
its been way too long
you fought so long

return the favor
cartons of oxygen
morphine pneumonia sin
its been way too long

return the favor
its gonna be clear soon
the fog will clear soon
you fought so long

IJR

[SubRosa]

this is for my grandfather who recently passed from lung cancer.

[Moonjava]

Very touching and powerful. You should share some more!
Peace,
Moonjava

[borut16]

Very touching and powerful. You should share some more!
Peace,
Moonjava I agree!

Love,
Borut

[Fierce_Flawless]

before i read that first coment i was thinking "that reminds me of my grandfather" (he died of lung complications.) very moving. that takes me back to when i first learned what the majority thinks dying means, and reminded me that abandonment is in every instance a gift.

so beautiful.