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tommyboy487
06-15-2005, 07:51 AM
The ice breaks,

As you introduce,

And the sun

Penetrates where possible,

Sadistically trying to

Abolish a perfectly

Symmetrical formation.



Then, as the water

Trickles, and slowly

Leaves it’s home,

You sit by me,

And we sit alone.

You smile, and

The drips become

More frequent; pronounced;

Obvious.



The moisture continues

To fuse; to leave.

A naturally chosen

Meeting place, and

As a miniature,

Nearly invisible ravine

Forms, I open to you.



The depth of the stream,

Increasing, Meanwhile,

The shallowness of

My attitude

Towards you, lost.

And my person is revealed.













Stream to river,

Now deeper; wider.

Pools form,

As I learn,

And when you

Touch me, a

Vigor is noticed,

Followed by a white,

Intricate film.

A million bubbles,

Moving at random,

Represent my thoughts.



A crocus and a rose,

Populate the riverside.

A tranquility, luring

Marveled creatures,

Portrays a river

Molded to perfection.

But under the surface,

A conflict;

An uncertainty;

A fear, of

What is to come.



I surface,

Again.

And see you,

It crosses my mind:

“What do I want”.

Just as the water, overflowing generously,

Begins its fall.

The freedom of falling.

No more feelings,

That are mixed.

And it’s what I want.















Falling.

Faster; Further.

What happens next,

Won’t change the now.

Will this river,

Join a sea,

Flood the land,

Or simply,

Evaporate,

Leaving nothing,

But a deprived;

Starving riverbed.

Dry, cracked, and lonely.



With what I’ve learnt,

I float on with you.

Towards an unknown,

A destination that seems

Important, but takes

Pleasure in deception.

This journey means more.

This journey,

That is just beginning,

Even though we find ourselves

Here,

So far from the source:

A mass of ice,

Cracked and melted,

But unchanged,

To all eyes but yours.



-Thomas Fox

TrippinBTM
06-15-2005, 03:42 PM
I thought it was done after the 4th stanza, then I scrolled down and to my delight, there was more! Fucking awesome, this has to be the best poem I've read here in a long time. A perfect metaphor, excellent writing. I can't praise this enough.

tommyboy487
06-16-2005, 12:03 AM
Thank you, that means alot.