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joker
06-15-2005, 02:36 AM
I think I'll call this one doubt:

Doubt controls my life,
It reforms me into an inferior being,
Knowledge is my survival guide,
Happiness continues to receed.

Things never seem to get better,
Reality consists of a cycle,
My sorrow is written in blood on the letter,
The only meaning in my existence is survival.

Lozi
06-15-2005, 08:49 PM
this one confuses me joker, but i like it anyway. 'my sorrow is written in blood on the letter'....mmm cool!

joker
06-15-2005, 09:28 PM
i have a twisted way of thinking. i guess that part of my mind inspired me to write it. glad ya liked it though.

Zion
06-15-2005, 09:33 PM
Damn G lighten up cat. Aint no shame in livin

joker
06-15-2005, 09:43 PM
Damn G lighten up cat. Aint no shame in livin
i'm not a g buddy. i'm just expressing my pessimism in writing.

RxHEAD
06-16-2005, 08:46 AM
I liked it, try not to doubt youself. I do too much second guessing. Good expression of being a survivor. To survive can be so much easier to some than others. yet the key word is survival. peace rx