Frist post, short peom

[Sininabin]

Since for some reason my thread won't let me copy and paste i just write my shortest poem and see what people think

"Rhyming to Hell"
Taking a wiff
Losing my grip
Lighting a fag
Taking a drag
Dizzy as hell
It's ringing a bell
Going down
Feeling low
Flying with life's flow
Taking a wiff
Drifting away
Taking a lick
Starting to sway
Recollecting deeds
Buring my bridges
Staning my future
Closing the road
With every shot i take
I'm making another stain
Upon my tarnished recorded
Lost in libraries
Closing the gate
Killing the light
No where to run

I can't possibly live the fight

[Lozi]

wow, good poem. like the rhyming you've used.

[Baby Fire-fly]

Love it! I like how it develops.

[Sininabin]

dude you guys are way to kind, but thank you