Pedestalled

[*electrica*]

Just found this one a-scribbled as well.

I'm not expecting to be risen
All pedestalled and powerful
You've assured me that will never happen
My eyes are big, so big
But they never see anything real
You can't deny I'm always sweet
I may not deserve anyone's respect
But I would love yours
If my love has any worth

[Lozi]

sorry i didn't comment earlier! just checking for any poems with no posts that i can ponder over....


i like the idea of big eyes, your poem suggests maybe trying to capture everything and innocene....maybe...not sure....but tis nice

[*electrica*]

That could be what it's about for all I know. I do not remember writing it.

[osiris]

de-serve. Take first the connotation of the prefix "de-", and then that of the word "serve", and consider each seperately. Then together. Perhaps in a thorough analysis and synthesis(solve et coagula) of the word, you will discover how it is that one gets what they de-serve.

(*psst!* *scandalous look, ear to ear grin* he whispers: "...because they take IT".)