fly...

[saffronfrancisburnet]

another poem for all
who feel life within this earth..


so tepid ,now this wild ocean
with memories floating,rolling
over ,on.
not like the tender, luke warm
seas with filtered,torn moments.
forgoten memories.
so soft,with the sting ,salted
waves ,tears will fall upon..
my body crumpled,licked
from dry tongues within.
forbiden moments,coming
here... haunting echos.
we all hear..
shall we fly ,upon the wild
winds.to follow lovers ,passing
by...
oh, moan love.. shall i crave more..
wings of passion, flames that
dance.for all....


thank you for reading
lovenpeace from saff

be whole love life unity...to all

[Necronizer]

oh, moan love.. shall i crave more..
wings of passion, flames that
dance.for all....
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I think the flames dance for you inside your mind, Your poem Its like a Proyection of some act you did in the past Mmmmm obviously thats the way i catched if im wrong tell me plz, I like it much Good Writer Peace&Love.....

[osiris]

"forbiden moments,coming"

That is what forbidden moments do. And hence, forward may we go (d).

[TrippinBTM]

Your punctuation confuses me sometimes, but I really liked this one. Very beautiful, great job.

[saffronfrancisburnet]

hi there

thank you all for reading

yes its all about how i see this life
from the first memory
the first reason i had....
and the first moment i reacted..
how i felt about all i have managerd to
do so far, and all i have not done .......

thank you all for reading this again
to see within the feeling is very understanding....
lovenpeace from saff