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Grunge
06-08-2005, 05:54 AM
The heavy smoke slowly drifts
like the slow evaporation of liquid
Until the last drop lifts
disappearing just as the sun did
How painful to wonder where your life has been
as you choke yourself to death
Following in the footsteps of all men
gasping for what they destroy, their breath

Moonjava
06-08-2005, 09:19 PM
that was intense. I like

TrippinBTM
06-09-2005, 04:01 AM
that's awesome, great job :)

Grunge
06-10-2005, 04:07 AM
thankyou for your comments