Paddington

[Spyder]

Here is where i leave myself,

Departure under the gaze

Of the Victorian dream.

Iron and machinery,

Black and cold,

But still i remember Paddington

with such sweet memory.

[littleskinny]

Big round of applause!!!


I love it very much indeed.:D

[Spyder]

wow thanks skinny i think thats the quickest poetry forum responce ever!

thanks also!

[littleskinny]

Doesn't seem to be much happening round here these days....

I wrote something similar about Waterloo once. It was self-indulgent and over-elaborate though - lacked the finesse of yours!

[Dandelion_Blood]

He, summed up leaving Padington very well.
:)
I like it.

[osiris]

when you say paddington... i know you don't mean it this way.... but i can't help think of the little stuffed animated bear... maybe you know what i am talking about... lol. it could fit quite nicely here, really. a departure from innocence, lamented.

much love :)

[Spyder]

its a train station in london...so yeah, thats where paddington bear was stranded, but its not about him really...its about leaving london from paddington station

[littleskinny]

Is there still a Paddington Bear there? I haven't been for ages - there used to be case with him in and his forlorn little note...please look after this bear...

I don't like Paddington station very much...can never find my way around...

[Spyder]

There might be, although i havent seen him