sharpness

[off_my_feet_freak]

forgive the spelling errors and be kind. but let me know what you think please

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You are my weakness
yes you are my love

pandoras box has opened

and push have come to shove

and my desparation

brings me back to you

sweet numbing addiction

without you,what would i do

and the sharpness in your taste

and the ruby red ,your flesh

has me in a bind again

but i reach you in distress

so now you are you are my life house

without you i cannot breath

you make me keep this mask on

you make me diseve

because you take away true happieness

control's your only care

after a while

thanks for reading
Peace

im not even there

[Fierce_Flawless]

the feeling behind it has been conveyed, i like, but maybe try it without rhyming next time- it's less confining.