My dream.

[onewayout]

I can feel you when you breathe
as your heart shadows a tree
I sense fulfilled endorphins in the air

shooting stars in the lucid sky
pushing me to give it one more try
give me your hand...
to end the grieving cries

moonlight shimmering off the rivers vein
grassy fields, wind so calm
my blood is filled with your charm
feeling never harmed

life no longer in vain
no more sitting in pain
not ashamed of feeling like a drain
finished with the shame
dripping away no more

dreaming of the sea
wooden ships everywhere...
choppy waves all around me
wondering where i'll go

awakened on the shore
sun rising before me
hearing whispers in my ear
realizing i've lost my fears

[TomDijon]

very very nice poem. i got caught up in a bit of the awkwardly rythmed rhymes, but when i just paid attention to the meaning, god damn! very nice

[Epiphany]

Heh, show off...