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dreamergirl
06-08-2004, 08:02 AM
i don't like titling poems.. i never have a title i think about when i read or write them, just who they are for/about.


you beg to be saved
but from what you don't know
as you wrap your hand tightly
around the gold

claw your way to the top
make others bleed
swim in thier distress
forgive none at rest

cough up your love
hold in your pain
leave your own children
out in the rain

disease the mind
kill the soul
someday soon
they'll never know

fight for your cause
kill all the strong
eat thier burning hearts
make it all wrong

littleskinny
06-08-2004, 11:37 AM
you beg to be saved
but from what you don't know
as you wrap your hand tightly
around the gold

claw your way to the top
make others bleed
swim in thier distress
forgive none at rest

cough up your love
hold in your pain
leave your own children
out in the rain


These are very powerful indictments of the corporate grasping mindset! Good write!

dreamergirl
06-09-2004, 12:35 AM
thanks you :)