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SvgGrdnBeauty
05-09-2005, 07:31 PM
My dear sweet Krishna
Beloved Govinda
When willst thou save me with thy flute?
Oh sweet music, I long to hear thee
Please rescue me from this desire
Fill my heart only with thy melody
Of happiness, bliss, and love
Oh sweet cowheard
Beloved teacher
Teach me eternally with thy flute

Dear sweet Jesus
Beloved Rabbi
When wilst thou take me by the hand?
Oh walk with me, in the sands of eternity
Please teach me to find our Father
Fill my heart only with thy sweet words
Of love, wisdom, and selflessness
Oh dear carpender
Beloved savior
Teach me by thy example and thy word

*Thank you Shaba for this next part*

Dear sweet Buddha
Beloved light
When wilst thou show me the right path?
Sit under the Bodhi tree with me
Forty days and forty nights
Fill my mind with with your eternal light
Oh dear Siddhartha
Enlightened one
Fill my path and show us we are all one

*And to Bhaskar for this one*

O Lord
beyond name and form,
light within the enlightened one,
May my attention be turned within to thee
the self in one, the self in all,
eternal, infinite, imperishable God,
O magnificent reality
Pristine Divinity,
may we all find our selves in thee.
shaba
05-09-2005, 08:21 PM
I really like this one, you should add more! One for Buddha one for Allah.
SvgGrdnBeauty
05-09-2005, 09:15 PM
I really like this one, you should add more! One for Buddha one for Allah.
I would like to add one for Buddha and perhaps Muhammed...but the thing is I would need help...I don't know too much about them. Perhaps you could give me a hand? :)
shaba
05-09-2005, 09:16 PM
I'd love to! I'll PM you if thats ok?
SvgGrdnBeauty
05-09-2005, 09:21 PM
I'd love to! I'll PM you if thats ok?
That's fine. :)
Bhaskar
05-10-2005, 06:45 AM
Its beautiful!


O Lord
beyond name and form,
light within the enlightened one,
May my attention be turned within to thee
the self in one, the self in all,
eternal, infinite, imperishable God,
O magnificent reality
Pristine Divinity,
may we all find our selves in thee.
SvgGrdnBeauty
05-10-2005, 12:42 PM
Its beautiful!


O Lord
beyond name and form,
light within the enlightened one,
May my attention be turned within to thee
the self in one, the self in all,
eternal, infinite, imperishable God,
O magnificent reality
Pristine Divinity,
may we all find our selves in thee.
:D
shaba
05-10-2005, 03:45 PM
We should do way more of these poem collaborations! Its so cool! Riding the same wavelength through great distances. Gives me shivers.
Hipkatmeow
05-10-2005, 08:52 PM
That is a beautiful poem! Good job!