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Smiling_Rose
05-08-2005, 06:06 PM
The dragon slept in the cheesy dust,
He rolled in Wensleydale craters.
He lit the sun with tangerine flames
And polished his scales so he shone
Like a comet as he shot through the skies
And just as I spotted his pearl white eyes,
And I knew he was real, darting about,
He fell from the clouds and crashed to the ground,
And his shape turned to dust,
Which I swept with a brush,
And kept in a pot,
To smoke in a pipe,
To release in my lungs,
along with some tar,
An old dragon friend who’s flown from afar.

Lozi
05-08-2005, 06:49 PM
'wensleydale's craters'

nice line :) good imagery and overall adjectivenessly um...well it's good really.

Smiling_Rose
05-10-2005, 10:40 AM
thank-you! :)