Guff-POW
04-08-2005, 06:11 PM
Ok... i haven't been on this site in like a long time so uhh i don't know this is a fun song i wrote based on real people and events but i'm not finished ... just want some feedback on what i wrote so far... tell me if i should bother finishing or not......
Joe Buzzcut and Sarcastic Glasses by Ryan Dow
Walking Down the street one day
There's Joe Buzzcut standing there
I was minding my own buisness
but, Joe Buzzcut didn't care
He said "EMPTY YOUR POCKETS SON
LETS SEE WHAT YOU'RE TRYING TO HIDE
YOUR EYES LOOK ALL RED AND GLAZED
YOU PIECE OF SHIT I BET YOUR FRIED"
I told him I don't got nothing
hoping he wouldn't catch my lie
but he found my secret stash and said
"PUT YOUR HANDS BEHIND YOUR BACK
YOU'RE GOING FOR A RIDE"
So I'm in the back seat of his car
my hands are losing circulation
I asked politely to loosen me he said
"NOT UNTIL WE GET TO THE STATION"
then he screamed and cussed me out and said
PUNKS LIKE YOU ALL MAKE ME SICK
then he pushed around his authority
cuz he's a short little fucker; ashamed of his extra small...
*Click* *Squeak* ; the door swings open
a middle aged and balding man passes
HERE'S A REAL WINNER he laughed
I knew; It was buzzcut's partner
Sarcastic Glasses
Buzzcut's screaming, Sarcastic glasses arms are crossed
just standing there smiling cuz he "accidently" lost
a little bit of evidence... just enough for a couple hits
just classic; he gets high; I pick up the cost
that's all i got i'm not sure how to end it what do you think???
Joe Buzzcut and Sarcastic Glasses by Ryan Dow
Walking Down the street one day
There's Joe Buzzcut standing there
I was minding my own buisness
but, Joe Buzzcut didn't care
He said "EMPTY YOUR POCKETS SON
LETS SEE WHAT YOU'RE TRYING TO HIDE
YOUR EYES LOOK ALL RED AND GLAZED
YOU PIECE OF SHIT I BET YOUR FRIED"
I told him I don't got nothing
hoping he wouldn't catch my lie
but he found my secret stash and said
"PUT YOUR HANDS BEHIND YOUR BACK
YOU'RE GOING FOR A RIDE"
So I'm in the back seat of his car
my hands are losing circulation
I asked politely to loosen me he said
"NOT UNTIL WE GET TO THE STATION"
then he screamed and cussed me out and said
PUNKS LIKE YOU ALL MAKE ME SICK
then he pushed around his authority
cuz he's a short little fucker; ashamed of his extra small...
*Click* *Squeak* ; the door swings open
a middle aged and balding man passes
HERE'S A REAL WINNER he laughed
I knew; It was buzzcut's partner
Sarcastic Glasses
Buzzcut's screaming, Sarcastic glasses arms are crossed
just standing there smiling cuz he "accidently" lost
a little bit of evidence... just enough for a couple hits
just classic; he gets high; I pick up the cost
that's all i got i'm not sure how to end it what do you think???