A tree Poem

[EternalHunter]

Descend
the mossy branches,
the quietly yawning boughs
into the sparkling emerald of a world
one day to be forgotten by the greed
of those who never knew
it's quiet perfection.
a Tragedy of
modern
times.
Slide
down the
scattered
sunlight
of a bark
river
and plunge into
a lake of
pungent earth, remember
where it came from.

[Hippievixen]

i love how the poem is in the shape of a tree...

this is so creative!

'the sparkling emerald of a world' took my breath.

lovely.

[fulmah]

Beautiful concrete poem!

Slide
down the
scattered
sunlight
of a bark
river

That's just delicious delivery... I enjoyed this one mucho!

[EternalHunter]

Thanks everyone. The poem is actually supposed to look a little different, but I couldn't make it work. The words "and" "into", and "a" "of" from the 4th and 3rd lines from the bottom are actually supposed to look like flowers.