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saffronfrancisburnet
04-04-2005, 06:16 PM
for all
torn memories, pieces fell
upon dirt.
thoughts wonder,what
was she feeling ,the moments
gone.....
stop ,look listen
does repeat upon the
ear i surrender.
knee deep ,sand filled souls.
gone footsteps,washed over.
tired smile,weeping down.
sun play, my hearts open
undone.
tread softely,i can wade.
swimming,past depths
yet,not to my grave.
eyes sharp,body warm
rolled away once more.
i surrender i open my world
tears fell,years mentioned.
weeping not ,no more...
thank you lovenpeace
from saff...
be not afraid to view
your years
its moments you collect...................
saffronfrancisburnet
04-04-2005, 11:32 PM
for all who question.......
bitten more,can not chew
a drip may slide upon the
chest,what secrets to let out...
tongue licking ,moist lips
below the vision blurs.
heart melts,passion burns...
body craves motions, moving
rhymes....
running within a swollowed
heart,undone i was caught,
once torn,once slashed.
what is lost ,can i find.
soul reaching,the bodies
pain, mind forcing
thoughts.to vanish away.
lay with me,once again.
i flicker,as his breathe
blows across my flames.
dance high upon the ride.
what stars collect,to view
a moons sad silver rays,
no warmth for her,only
the coming of the day.
sing ,soft rays appear,
upon my body,what
wind blow them in,
a window locked,yet pains
of glass,bright glory
another day.......
i lay across the chest,his arms
around,what more
what more
could..
i have to say.
thank you
lovenpeace from saff
how time can fly
yet we still have life
to live...
.
saffronfrancisburnet
04-06-2005, 10:39 PM
to all
tender waters,i bathe in tides
washed to shores,far off lands.
you speak within visions.
sunbeams ,wonderful wishes
then it rains..
soaked again,
nothing here,just my soul
dripped in tainted tears.
repaired for who,to see
this body hangs within the
air,long shelves of light,
to tickle to tease embrace.
tender ripples will dance on
hearts,fallen lovers part.
just for moments to be one.
feel your cup ,and smile.
joined by paths to be known.
so gentle lovers hold on, tis
only moonbeams shore.
wet foot prints,to follow
a dawning, rainbow filled
echoing day.
repaired for who,who ever
may need.a simple cast
arms to fold ,ones world
in pure safety....
thank you for reading
lovenpeace from saff
each moment counts
each breathe has a reason
so night to day
fulmah
04-06-2005, 11:25 PM
excellent collection, saff! your first was my favorite, but the second had my favorite line...
lay with me,once again.
i flicker,as his breathe
blows across my flames.
powerful, passionate imagery!
You seem to have a great grasp on life... it's always enjoyable to read your work; thanks for sharing it! :)
steffan
04-07-2005, 12:00 AM
thanx saf, nice work
gdhmomchild
04-07-2005, 11:07 AM
Really loved the first two saff.. Reminds me more of the stuff you used to write awhile back.
eyes sharp,body warm
rolled away once more.
i surrender i open my world
tears fell,years mentioned.
weeping not ,no more...
I couldn't pick out a favorite stanza on"for all" because the way one played into the next...it made a whole picture. Thanks again sweety.
saffronfrancisburnet
08-15-2005, 04:52 PM
just catching time on here
reading through stuff
thank you all for reading
these are me,from me to you all
all i feel and think written to read..
thank you again for reading...
lovenpeace from saff
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