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Applespark
04-03-2005, 09:27 PM
Timeless
Feminine dream
Moon warm
I am
For all your skin
Obscured within
Sacred smiles
From scarlet lips
Secrets
In these fingertips
Lids draw
In deprivation
Distinct desire
I move
In cryptic soma
Firebelle
04-05-2005, 08:11 PM
Mmm...delicious, Apple!
Hippievixen
04-06-2005, 06:46 PM
bewitching...
i loved it.
fulmah
04-06-2005, 07:25 PM
I'm glad this got pulled back to the top... I read it the other day and didn't have time to comment, but I do now and this is perfect... it's a style many try to do but don't do very successfully, whereas this is vibrant on many levels... excellent work, thanks for sharing it! :)
Applespark
04-06-2005, 11:24 PM
Thanks everyone...Does anyone have any comments on what they think it's about?
gdhmomchild
04-07-2005, 10:56 AM
...all depends where my mind is when I read it. I always love your writing and miss you posting in here as much as you used to. Thanks sweety~*
TrippinBTM
04-07-2005, 04:57 PM
Beautiful, it have nice flow/rhythm. I don't know what it's about, but I get the feeling it's sexual in nature.
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