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onelovemarley
04-02-2005, 10:03 PM
as i sit in my room, there's no one here but me

the only sound i can hear is my pencil writing these words
then i catch the voices of others outside
he asked me to come, bu ti just said goodbye
maybe i'm better off this way
alone in my room where i'll stay
as i listen to their voices
i think about my choices
if my sandals are worn
does that mean this is where i stop, where i belong?
or do i keep on going through the storm
maybe it won't be long
help me understand before this paper bleeds more thoughts of starvation

soulrebel51
04-03-2005, 02:33 AM
I didn't really like that at all.... too emo.

mysti
04-03-2005, 11:32 PM
it was O.K. because it sounded like it came from the heart, ive felt that way before.

saffronfrancisburnet
04-04-2005, 11:00 PM
this is actually beautiful to me

to be honest with your self
about your life at this moment
is all you need to answer your own
question .....

reflect to move on...you
will understand this
when you have realized
your path...

the calm will come.
lovenpeace from saff