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*peace*child*
04-02-2005, 07:48 AM
A clouded mirror that wouldn’t lie
Forgotten blade reveals the sin
Nobody left, try not to cry
familiar desire from within

A shameful sniff to drown the pain
That virgin glow clouds my sight
Just satisfy my every vain
Chop one more line to feel all right

It plagued their bodies and their soul
A future destined to dismay
An empty mind and no control
The day I gave my life away

pagansrule!
04-07-2005, 03:52 AM
The visuals are really quite vivid and the way they are integrated seamlessly with the overall atmosphere is awesome!! i loved it, but then I happen to love anybody who writes poetry to begin with. Well done