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Razor Face
03-13-2005, 07:23 AM
Still Life



Incongruous hands that draw

Judgments all numbered

Shadow and color
The eyes touch them
If they can see as seers see

Horizons always blue, all the frozen, deepening, misty shades
Entreat to be embraced.


Tedious study,
knowing that only you can bridge,
from now to then, from here to there.

Tye_DyeBrain
03-13-2005, 07:31 AM
Razor Face- I thought this piece was rad:) ...really liked the line

"The eyes touch them
If they can see as seers see"

mysti
03-13-2005, 02:57 PM
that was good, nice job.

Razor Face
03-14-2005, 02:12 PM
Thank you for your comments, glad you liked it.

Hippievixen
03-14-2005, 03:26 PM
this was my favorite part:

'Horizons always blue, all the frozen, deepening, misty shades
Entreat to be embraced.'