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buxillafion
03-12-2005, 07:07 AM
Even her mere presence leaves me satisfied.
Dreams, fantasies blinding me.
Wich way to salvation, the holy city?
ZION
Wich path is the right one?
Dreams Fantasies blinding me.
I will forge my own path.
Leave this confusion far behind.
But all paths lead to her
No detours, she is zion.
She is enlightenment.
She is beautiful.

onelovemarley
03-14-2005, 02:49 AM
i much like your poems...i write aswell

and zeppelin does rule!!

buxillafion
03-15-2005, 02:23 AM
Thanks alot. Bob Marley rules almost as much as zeppelin!

onelovemarley
03-15-2005, 06:16 AM
well i'd have to say zeppelin and marley are two of my fav's

gdhmomchild
03-16-2005, 12:44 AM
Appreciated this, very pretty. Thanks