untimely visit

[kjhippielove88]

Death Interrupted slumber,
Untimely Visit.
At the foot of my bed he stood.
eyes without question
he had come for me.
Time took away its hands,
Grim extended his
Come--
No stranger was he
his presence did not scare.
I accepted this untimely visit
as I did my maiden death.
'twas time to ascend
for this body was merely a host.

[saffronfrancisburnet]

i love this peom

as in life as in death
to accept both.....

if only in peotry can words
explain for we never really
have to chance to tell after the act..........


love npeace from saff

[kjhippielove88]

thanks for the feedback

[Hippievixen]

"I accepted this untimely visit
as I did my maiden death.
'twas time to ascend
for this body was merely a host."

Lovely as always, KJ.

*hugz*

[kjhippielove88]

i wrote it during lunch at school :rolleyes: theres more work to be done and im not sure about the title. but again thanks for the feedback :)