forbiden still we touch.....

[saffronfrancisburnet]

for all in life


touch,reach the hand so fine.
forbiden to taste,lip seals my
heart.
not driven deep just ,here within
a moment open to all.
how told from the start,
forbiden friut not to enjoy.
a body longs we see,them cry
to be held tight,held with all
loves might.

touch,hold only for this moment
for we see,pain rise within the eye.
how far to step ,a line not crossed.
Yet undone,gone....
lovers close a view,forget loniness
for those standing alone.
forbiden fruit ,the choice to enjoy.
but wholey with truth to belong.
for in the night,the waking days,
the soul will only judge you,me.
THEM. alone...


thank you

seek only that is truth..
love n peace from saff

[gdhmomchild]

touch,hold only for this moment
for we see,pain rise within the eye.
how far to step ,a line not crossed.
Yet undone,gone....
lovers close a view,forget loniness
for those standing alone.
forbiden fruit ,the choice to enjoy.
but wholey with truth to belong.
for in the night,the waking days,
the soul will only judge you,me.
THEM. alone...
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My fav stanza, but I thought the last lines could be pared down...the "you, me, them. alone" I think it would give the last line better impact. Thanks sweety, much enjoyed~!

[Hippievixen]

i liked this...

thanks for sharing.

'forbidden fruit, the choice to enjoy'

i'm always choosing to enjoy :)

[fulmah]

great poem, saff! I too enjoyed the second stanza, especially the way it wound down at the end. thanks!

[saffronfrancisburnet]

thank you for replys

i agree with both sides
the end thrown to life
the end may fall way
but all together we
still feel alone with
our self our soul...
until one captures the
eye of another........
the inner eye of value for love
for life.....

alone.




and alone we are not,in such times
of empty glory,this capitalist world
which stripped all of life in hand

so close the minds,the feelings,yet
a world apart from living standards.
long live socialism........

love n peace from saff