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steffan
03-09-2005, 12:04 AM
you have never held my hand
or taken lips to mine
we have yet to walk the sand
and share what comes to mind
yet i think i know you
I gaze into an image broken
try to feel the words you speak
I strain to hear those words unspoken
find strength for a spirit weak
should i profess to love you
are you even truly there
or a figment from a dream
are you someone with a life to share
or just a ghost in my machine



.....damn i wish i could have taken this to where i wanted it to go,
and meanwhile,, i was stillllll thinken

mysti
03-09-2005, 02:35 AM
nice work!! ive felt the same way with some 1 too. i loved that!! you have a way to blend words:)

steffan
03-09-2005, 10:02 PM
thanks mysti, :)