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Negative red
03-08-2005, 07:06 PM
Priest, in a sky lit room,
ink in his blood,
what can he do,
what can he do?

Suprise gift of a stolen kiss,
taken from an empty room,
what can i do,
what can i do?

Selfless soul sacrafice,
god owns all you knew,
taken from a heartless bitch,
i give it back to you,
for you.

Show me the spiders nest,
the spiders nest of youth,
buy me a beer,
this place has lost its truth.

Priest in a sky lit room,
ink in his blood,
what can you do,
well what can you do?

Razor Face
03-08-2005, 08:22 PM
My interpretation of this is acceptance and forgiveness. (I rarely interpret poems as the writers intended.) But I liked the way it flowed while I ingested the images and meanings. The repetition worked very well, made it feel like a chant. Beautiful poem, I thought.

Hippievixen
03-08-2005, 08:33 PM
"Priest in a sky lit room,
ink in his blood,
what can you do,
what can you do?"

I like that...

Very nice.