December night

[cassiopeia]

a clear horizon
dark mountains
dancing
nothern light

daylight wins the fight
nature
wonders
under the deep snow
grows a flower.

'cos
december night
it's a glims,
a glimse of
paradis

[kidder]

One of your better ones! Love the contrast in the opening stanza! You close with a sense of glory- don't we need it on these grim late winter days....thanx

[cassiopeia]

thanks...i like this one...i finally got to say something i really wanted to for a long time..:) got a little spring feeling now..hopefully the snow is gone tomorrow to..:) glad you liked it..have a nice day

[Burbot]

i like it...it reminds me of a song i heard....cant put my finger on it though...

[bobbyellis]

hey cass....
really nice, it really flows, and it ends in utopia. i really like it!

[Gypzy]

Really sweet...a ray of hope!

[gdhmomchild]

daylight wins the fight
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Liked it but that line clinched it for me. Thanks