Beneath i am

[orionstarbeam]

hey ... just wrote this n wanted to share it...i don't really understand it..it just came out of me... *peace* x x x

I feel

Undone

Stuck

Tangled in blankets

Frantically

Searching for myself

My childhood

Maybe

Reason

Logic

Crazy

Colours

I don’t know where I am

My emotions are sticky

Compressed

Squashed inside

My inside

Somewhere

Heavy ocean

My heart is open

To anyone

Be good

Be strong

Gone

You are

Drops of tear

Tear a cut in falling skies

Rainbows darker now I cry

Burst please

Animate this

Still me

Beneath I am

This broken sky

Star smile

Inside you

Sing

Why

Eye

Fall

Fly

My soul

Speaks in music

Translating

Inner core

Strings of gold

Coiled

Wrapped in perfect spirals

You

Always there...

[fulmah]

lovely... loved the way you worked the short lines... it made this seem more frantic and forced attention on all the details. great job, and I look forward to reading more!

[orionstarbeam]

aww thanks.. x it's ded nice to have someone read your thoughts and compliment them... :)

[gdhmomchild]

yeah~! This worked nicely. It is perfect for the short line. Unfortunately lottsa people try using them when they shouldn't. This was a good example of how well they can work.