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lumina
02-10-2005, 10:49 PM
There is a sadness
i can't explain
alone in this darkness
i sit here in pain
he said that he'd stay
i never though he'd leave
now theres nothing left to do
but fall to my knees and grieve
he took me with him when he left
but he'll never see
what pain he caused to my heart
and what he took from me

BraveSirRubin
02-11-2005, 06:02 AM
This sounds like a million other poems. There is no uniqueness to it... nothing!

Joseph0
02-12-2005, 01:36 PM
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