a poem i wrote while on acid

[Cactus Juice]

i was really fucked up one night and decided to write this poem to some chick (but somehow it upset her). i know its a bit crude but keep in mind that i was under the influence when i wrote this thing

You are a super chick
my dick is thick
I feel like I've been hit over the head with a brick
there's no need for talk
just get in the bed and ill make you bleed red
my hands are glowing like a dazzling white breeze
that hold the key to unlocking your virginity
peace

wow after reading this thing again i realized that its probably the shittiest poem ive ever written... why the hell am i even posting this

[NaykidApe]

i was really fucked up one night and decided to write this poem to some chick (but somehow it upset her). i know its a bit crude but keep in mind that i was under the influence when i wrote this thing

You are a super chick
my dick is thick
I feel like I've been hit over the head with a brick
there's no need for talk
just get in the bed and ill make you bleed red
my hands are glowing like a dazzling white breeze
that hold the key to unlocking your virginity
peace

wow after reading this thing again i realized that its probably the shittiest poem ever written... why the hell am i even posting this

to prove 14 yr olds shouldn't do acid?

[Cactus Juice]

uh like no way

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Acid is good for you.

Acid can make the talentless......

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*tada* equally talentless.

[Cactus Juice]

is that supposed to be an insult? cause if it is im honestly quite offended
you should see some of my other material

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is that supposed to be an insult? cause if it is im honestly quite offended
you should see some of my other material
Relax, mate, I was just kidding.

Here, have a beer.

[Cactus Juice]

dont worry man i dont even write poems
in fact thats the first poem ive ever written, i dont actually have other material... when you get to know me you will see that almost everything i say is an inconsistency
usually i just blame it on the drugs

[syd]

The poem was pretty weird i say

[orionstarbeam]

I think the poem is quite strange and puts some grusome images in to your head..but at the same time i think it displays an honest un-sugar coated view of a young males lust and sexual desire for a female ... in that instant he wrote it ...

[abnormal_cat]

The poem kicks ass!

[Rafaela]

cactus juice I'm from toronto as well! lets dance

[Rafaela]

lotusblossom! I didn't forget you, but how can i make out with ym monitor? I tried... *bows head in defeat*

[Cactus Juice]

cactus juice I'm from toronto as well! lets dancewow! usually i only get to dance with girls who are completely inebriated
your pic is pretty hot by the way

[RoBoWaLkEr]

Nah guys, Rafaela and me are gonna get it on crazy style, even though I don't even know her. But she's just that smokin and im just that charming.

[Cactus Juice]

I'd dance with you, but it'd look strange for a "grown man" to dance with a teenager....haha
not much stranger than the old man who lives in a tent in the playground near my house

[BraveSirRubin]

You really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Suck

[VanAstral]

some chick don't sound much like a super chick if she don't like that yeah.

[Orsino2]

This is your brain on drugs: wtf.

[Cactus Juice]

This is funny. I should take acid!yeah acid makes everything funny... it will make you laugh so hard that youll feel like youve been kicked in the face when you come down
people think weed makes things funny... lol

[_chris_]

woah, brave sir rubin, thats harsh man! And happy leaves do make things pretty funny, you dont need chemicals for that.

P.S. The poem was kinda fucked up (in a good way though), but an insight to a mind on acid. Not bad!

[VanAstral]

You really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really Suck


the message is cliche, but the structure, 10 rows of really, really nice (by the end the word had lost all meaning and I had forgotten everything). and then the final word, a reminder to breathe, that's tops, slighty hypnotic, mate!

[Cactus Juice]

You mean happy leaves don't make everything funny?reality is just way more exaggerated and funny on acid. weed seems dull in comparison.
seriously, you dont even know funny until youve watched barney after eating a couple tabs. ahahahah i almost died
just be careful to keep your dose low, because when you eat too much everything just gets really peculiar and scary
like when your dog walks up to you with a knife in its teeth, it gets a bit unsettling

[browneydgrl]

the message is cliche, but the structure, 10 rows of really, really nice (by the end the word had lost all meaning and I had forgotten everything). and then the final word, a reminder to breathe, that's tops, slighty hypnotic, mate! oh man...im dyin'...thats funny shit