Little Me On Fire

[*electrica*]

It's pretty much the same subject I'm stuck on for now, but a very different style. It's a little more overtly dirty and angry than I'm normally capable of, but it was bursting to get out. I actually find this rather funny and entertaining. It's not to be taken seriously at all.


My back's about to snap
And my legs are getting tired
I'm so goddamn sore
I can't take you anymore
I bow down to you, my sire
You've set little me on fire

But I know very well all you care about
Is how loud you make me scream
So I'll find someone else to send me flowers
Fuck you, you're so sour

And I don't want to be ignored
Though you admit you often do
It's not your fault, the blame's all mine
For laying beneath you

I think I've gone brain dead
From running my mouth to you
You don't hear a word
Just say it's absurd
There's nothing for me to do
Except wag my ass at you

I know very well all you care about
Is how sexy I can be
I'll find someone else to send me flowers
Fuck you, you're so sour

And I don't want to be ignored
Though you admit you often do
It's not your fault, the blame's all mine
For opening up to you

I know very well all you care about
Is how obedient I am
I'll find someone else to send me flowers
Fuck you, you're so sour
You've lost all your power

[fulmah]

Every time I read your stuff, I swear I can hear music behind it! I liked the vibe this one had… those sarcastic tones always work for me. Good to see you posting more lately, and I’ll be looking forward to reading more. :)


And I don't want to be ignored
Though you admit you often do
It's not your fault, the blame's all mine
For opening up to you
my fav lines

[*electrica*]

You hear music because I'm actually writing lyrics now. It's cool that you can tell. I love when you reply to my stuff.

[orionstarbeam]

wow....i really loved your poem...kind of feel i can relate to it to...just that feeling of arrrgghhh fuck you!!but then you still love them.... well..hope to read mooore!!!
*peace*
Suzanne x x x