tick tock

[wild.flower]

tick tock
second hand
s...l...o...w...l...y
moves around the clock
move...stop...move...stop
tick...tock...tick...tock
in a never-ending-always-moving-cycle
in the same-continuing-never-changing-pattern
i wonder if the second hand
ever gets bored
we should throw some variety
into its life

[Rafaela]

neat approach. :)

[wild.flower]

neat approach. :)
:) thanks. i was experimenting. i'm glad you like it!!

[BraveSirRubin]

Shit.

[wild.flower]

Shit.
Hmm...why is it shit?

[_chris_]

He slags off all the poems, dont take him seriously. I like it anyway