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Desert Stargazer
02-08-2005, 04:10 AM
Hey Mr Spooky
can you lend me a smile ?
you've been sitting in the door way
for quite a long while

The bottle that you finished
is giving off a glow
your dangling participle
is sticking to the snow

I guess you're completely dead now
so I will bid a fond farewell
I may fill that doorway next
good bye you just can't tell


February 14 2005 Desert Stargazer

Lozi
02-09-2005, 09:17 AM
february 14th? but it's only the 9th today. spooky:p

the spooky man seems kinda alone poor thing. good realistic writing. me liking

Desert Stargazer
02-09-2005, 03:10 PM
Lozi ! You caught me...I had written several poems, (and this one) for a Valentine message, but forgot to change the Date.