quick fix poetry

[bluefairy]

no one says "excuse me"

no one says "im sorry"
no one wishes to be heard
and no one sees the world.
what if i was left
what if it were gone
would the world look back at you
and say those simple words?

im sorry
im hurt
i feel the pain inside
but no one looks at it and sees the simple word

no one says "excuse you"
or even "i love"
its too simple to ignore
the simple feets above.

curl your toes and lead the line
your just like all the rest
hide your thoughts
your mind
and leave at any time.
its just the same as yesterday
when i was all alone
youre here, im here
but leave us all alone.

pass by and knock me over
dont look a second time.
youre not the shit you think you are
and im not it either

see you in the lime light
see you next in line
ill say im sorry,
you'll say im sorry,
only in another world
cuz we're like all the rest
who say we'll do it next time
but when ever we see it coming
we run and hide
and leave it all behind
until we're next in line
until the next time
until i see you once again
in another life.

[bluefairy]

tell me what you think...not about the poem, but tell me what you thought of when you read this. i would really like to know how people interpret what i write and even what other people write. it's interesting to see how i felt when i wrote this and how others feel when they read it. lemme know what you think. i bet you'll be surprised.
p.l.and above all, happiness,

desiree michele