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saffronfrancisburnet
02-06-2005, 08:09 PM
to all
and more....


incarcerate, to dictate whose body
would you choose.
not gravel from ground,under skin
from tears.
yet a balance to reveal.
only lavish eyes,tongues so wide.
To lick the inner peace...

what willing roots do we unearth.
not to mention, friuts that fall...
but soul inhailed,to spike a heart,
for you..me..who?
so believe ,or not. inner views
can twist you.
In two, mind blown outbursts,
soul unnerved for who...

A heart, that life of lies. drink
now and deep ,you,
have a path,within the tranquil
waves,a danger in you.
transparent quilt,the worlds afire..
only for you..
take hold the vessel,climb high the
hill,past me ,past you..
the whole life,each drop of air...
to taste for us each day...

to you i say,be whole,be free
to be you to be me....
but watch ,see the cost,it ends
our world in greed.....
so body longs groans for peace.
what power shall they send....
to free the human,soul caught
high...
mind blown gone....heart left aside.
yet togetherness is in the words..
we,you me....


thank you
love n peace from saff

saffronfrancisburnet
02-06-2005, 08:12 PM
hi there
sorry seems to have posted this twice

loven peace from saff

great welcome to words added to this
thank you....

OneUndone
02-06-2005, 09:21 PM
Very nice, Saff. Digs down into the soul of transformation and tries to make peace with the light at the center. Always enjoy reading your work!

gdhmomchild
02-11-2005, 07:01 AM
what willing roots do we unearth.
not to mention, friuts that fall...
but soul inhailed,to spike a heart,
for you..me..who?
so believe ,or not. inner views
can twist you.
In two, mind blown outbursts,
soul unnerved for who...

A heart, that life of lies. drink
now and deep ,you,
have a path,within the tranquil
waves,a danger in you.
transparent quilt,the worlds afire..
only for you..
take hold the vessel,climb high the
hill,past me ,past you..
the whole life,each drop of air...
to taste for us each day...

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Nice lines in there Saff. Got a boat load a catch up to do in here,lol, what...did everyone and their second cousin post in here the last 12 days my puter crashed?