Cabin In The Woods

[Floyd Soul]

These are the words I wrote to my song.

Hello baby would you like to see
my cabin in the woods.
It's a beatiful walk under the trees
To my cabin in the woods
We can talk by the fire
At the cabin in the woods
I want us to be lovers
At the cabin in the woods

Thoughts of the future and of the past
Are hidden in the trees
A world of it's own loved and loathed
Hidden in the trees
There are some things you'll never find
Hidden in the trees
It's a place where nobody knows
Hiding in the trees

Gangs of birds singing in the street
At the cabin in the woods
Playin' music and shuffling our feet
At the cabin in the woods
Everybody loves each other
At the cabin in the woods
If you're ever in a spot of bother
Go to the cabin in the woods

Nobody knows who lives
In the castle in the mountains
It must be nice to live alone
In the castle in the mountains
Hear the silence of the night
Or the wind through the trees
All in the glow of the moon
The castle in the mountains.

Four verses. I'd appreciate any advice, opinions and anything. Thank you.

[Desert Stargazer]

I like it, Floyd. I see the maturing from one age to the next.. (cabin to castle..) you have a good imagination. The horse reminds me of the one in the Disney Film "Darby O' Gill And The Little People."

[Floyd Soul]

Thanks very much....it's just images from my imagination.