carve

[chandra anjali]

carve into the sun
you ideals and battles left undone
hope for a new day
to take the stains, pains, and pressures away
stare into the moonlit halls

catch the dust with your mind
rearrange it in the time which i left sitting
on the coffee table

down with downers
up with sunshine

carve into the sun
your new name

[makno]

i like it !

[Applespark]

I like your poem

[know1nozme]

This poem had "fallen off the page" - so to speak and I didn't read it until now. Thanks Applespark, for posting to this thread.

So positive and full of energy! Wow! Makes me smile just to read it :)