Rose of dew

[sylvanlightning]

Mist shrouds,
the horizons' shoulders,
as a wary scene
from an archaic moor.

All is stillness,
ephemeral quietude,
save the ticking of clocks
slightly offset.

And it begins,
a crystalline beading
of geometric precision,
petals of dew fall like veils.

[Hippievixen]

Sylvan... this is outstanding... not unlike your other postings...

You make me a better writer, just reading your works.

[ripple23]

i like it.

[sylvanlightning]

thank you both for responding, it always feels good to receive feedback.

[KittenX]

Gentle voice in this, I loved the specifics such as "horizons' shoulders," "slightly offset", "petals of dew" made me smile.

[gdhmomchild]

All is stillness,
ephemeral quietude,
save the ticking of clocks
slightly offset.
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Thank you, lol~*

[*peace*child*]

Good poem, keep writing.

[fulmah]

The last stanza is a perfect description of this poem, or your style in general. Every syllable serves its purpose, here. I absolutely love it. The only complaint I have is that you’re not posting as much anymore! Had to dig it up… :) Hope all is well with you, and glad you could stop in to share this!

[Smiling_Rose]

this is so, so good! post more!!

[sylvanlightning]

Thank you all for your kind comments.