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kjhippielove88
01-08-2005, 04:33 PM
i wrote this one an hour ago..

swallowed by the sea
lost in my lover's heart
he took these young hands
and led me into Sweet Oblivion

Watched over by dancers in the sky
Held in Love's grip
i followed down paths of his soul
and he led me into Sweet Oblivion

Tangled in Vines of his Spirit
Shadowed by his Light
he Inhaled every bit of me
and led me into Sweet Oblivion

Sweet oblivion, Oblivion sweet
our love rests in the eye of the tornado

BlackGuardXIII
01-08-2005, 04:42 PM
http://www.hipgallery.com/photopost2/data/500/9430boards2.jpg


http://www.hipgallery.com/photopost2/data/500/9430Pool.jpg

puddin
01-08-2005, 04:50 PM
You should be proud, thats an awesome poem.And those pictures are purdy.

kjhippielove88
01-08-2005, 05:27 PM
thanks puddin and those pictures are beautiful ken

Hippievixen
01-11-2005, 06:14 AM
tangled in the vines of his spirit
shadowed by his light
he inhaled every bit of me
and led me into sweet oblivion

i love this stanza, kj...

especially the 'inhaled every bit of me' part...

ahhh...

very very nice.

makes me wanna roll one :)

kjhippielove88
01-12-2005, 07:41 PM
thanks for the feedback