winter moon

[standingdeer]

Stars appear then slightly vanish
through the northern clouds that drift apart
revealing the lights of the universe one at a time

Will I awake to the sight of snow
dusted from the shoulders of old man winter
riding in on the elk, an owl perched upon his shoulder
draging dreams

Winter moon
brings delicate fingers to the earth
a lover of all seasons

Standingdeer

[Hippievixen]

Will I awake to the sight of snow
Dusted from the shoulders of old man winter,

Standingdeer
My fave lines. :)

Whoa man, that was magical.

Thanks for sharing!

[standingdeer]

Thank you, I wasn't sure about this poem but it turned out to be magical in such a small way. Lets you hang onto a moment.. I think simplicity can work at times.

Standingdeer

[ripple23]

nice...

[sylvanlightning]

A gem. At once, gentle and powerful. Yes, a magical grace and flow...

[KittenX]

Mmm such delicacy, I ate this up and enjoyed.

[Will I awake to the sight of snow
dusted from the shoulders of old man winter
riding in on the elk, an owl perched upon his shoulder
draging dreams]
Great image, tranquil...

[standingdeer]

Thank you all for your comments, bless you hearts for such kind words. It is inspiring to produce more for all of you.

Standingdeer

[Anavarius]

Its a very beautiful piece. The first lines really took me to the sky. ;)