Morning Impression

[ripple23]

Morning Impression

In this morning of trembling bird-songs and stretching
an assembly of orchards trade apples
between shadows
the mountains put on their skirts of mist
and daffodils

this country a constellation of sorrows
a horizon that is doing circles around the tallest flower

the light teaches you how to open your eyes.

[dreamergirl]

i like the line about the mountains putting on skirts of flowers.. very nice :)

[sylvanlightning]

Yes, open eyes and open hearted, this is a beautiful painting full of care to detail.
I like it.

[KittenX]

[the mountains put on their skirts of mist
and daffodils

this country a constellation of sorrows
a horizon that is doing circles around the tallest flower

the light teaches you how to open your eyes.]

Absolute WOW, stunned I am....I truely mean that.

[Major Peacenik]

*GREAT* images in this poem, I love it.