oblivious modesty

[RainyDayHype]

While in a trance,
Confusing dream with reality
or is it reality with dream?
The clouds take me away
to a far and distant land
embeded with roses
The smell of wind in my hair
Slightly offbeat and tranquilized,
I kiss the air

[God]

such art! it put me in a trance.
oh, speak more, my gentle beauty!

[God]

so amazing, i just read it a second time!
it's... i don't know. psychedelic? ecstatic? blissfully tranquil?
i don't know who you are, but you are a great poet. Keep it up!

[Moonjava]

I love lines 2 and three the most, but the whole poem is amazing. Thanks for sharing this simplistic yet wonderful poem.

[osiris]

And is thy Hair not the trees through which doth blow this gentle breeze? Off-beat? No, no(yes, yes!). You're just filling in the empty spaces, with love.

eMBeMLaHV! :)