The Prolatarians Have Nothing to Lose

[_chris_]

Still a work in progress, and i'm only 14. Please dont go and copyright it as i need it for my exams!


The smog above
The land below
The workeres work
Through the wind and snow

The employers punish
The slave-drivers shout
The employees tire
They want let out

The children laugh
The children play
And in the playground
They'll be made to pay

The money motives
The hidden plan
The capatalist plot
To rule the land

Under a spell
It goes to show
Like a lamb to slaughter
The workers go

In a search for wealth
That will never ever end
Hidden from the truth
Scars are gained that will never mend

A slave to the wage
But it's just a vote away
A system that will help them
A system that will stay

[saffronfrancisburnet]

hi there


well this is beautiful and a grim reminder
of the system we live in

no matter how old we are the capitalists
will take all away in one way or another


great picture in your words
of a life with pleasure.. but

like the story of animal farm...
it turns to the greed,

ie
and in the playground
they will be made to pay


love n peace from saff

keep this writing up
open your mind and you will
write some very deep political
pieces ,maybe even for music
this would sound loud and clear......................

[Lozi]

i think it's really good chris! and at the age of 14 too! wowser! that's pretty legendary writing talent dude!

[Hippievixen]

hi chris,

one of these dayz, i'll be a highschool English teacher, and hopefully i'll have students like you! :)

a great submission...

post more!