The Time before ones death

[GothModernHippy]

A time will come before your death
When you have taken your last breath

You'll remember what it was you did
when you were only just a kid

you'll swim upon your endless fate
as you arrive at heavens gate

or you could end up just as well
upon the firery gates of hell

for you'll remember what you did
when you were only just a kid

*comments?*

To much hallucinogenic drugs for this sixteen year old

[Duck]

I think you should write a real poem (screw the rhyming shit)

[God]

who's to say what heaven and hell are? i think it's pretentious to make such a statement. Although that was a pretty cool and funny poem, at least I found it funny.

[Duck]

God you're an asshole, don't listen to that guy, that was some deep shit