The Fly

[bird_migration]

There is a fly
in my eye
why
oh
why
flew that fly
in my eye?

[GirlInTheGreenGrass]

what do you mean? What does the fly represent? I guess in the picture it might look like a fly.. like your pupil is it's body and around it are the wings.. i can't think of anything else. cool pic tho.it's like you're looking at me or somp;)

[BraveSirRubin]

Poetic genious!

[nitemarehippygirl]

fly suicide. kamikaze.

[GirlInTheGreenGrass]

is that a sarcastic remark?

[dhs]

Good you translate it into dutch for those of us who are hearing impaired?

[GirlInTheGreenGrass]

it was short and focused...unresolved...made me wander. :) That's about it. Nice peice.
<3

[bird_migration]

it was short and focused...unresolved...made me wander. :) That's about it. Nice peice.
<3
Thank you for your wise and encouraging words.

Love, bird.

[Spyder]

it didnt really say anything to me...what does it mean? did you write it with purpose or intent? what are you trying to express?

[BraveSirRubin]

it didnt really say anything to me...what does it mean? did you write it with purpose or intent? what are you trying to express?

Why should you look for an answer... such a haiku type poem is completely subjective. Its simplicity gives it so many directions.

[KittenX]

I like this, I don't know why exactly, but the fly can be many things. Worry? Or object of one's affection? Sort of like a cupid's arrow penetraiting one's heart...hmm well at least that's how this poem worked for me.