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Peace-Phoenix
11-11-2004, 06:28 PM
A lot of my poetry is very political, but it has been about subjects that I have no direct experience with really. I've formed opinions on them, opinions that I'm very passionate about, but are not intimately personal to me. This is a more personal poem, and the personal is the political. It came out of a conversation with Taz who, in some ways, seems a kindred spirit in such things....

Paki in the Middle



I watch as Boeing meets building, twin towers reduced to rubble,

And see the hatred in their hearts, they call me to Jihad;

“Allah calls upon you, Child of the East,

Come shed the blood of Infidels, our martyr, semtex-clad!’

I see a nation ripped asunder, the Arab people blown apart,

By the bombs of truth and justice, freedom’s flag unfurled;

“Liberty calls upon you, Child of the West,

Come kill for democracy, let oil drown the world!”

And while both sides hold their heroes, their honoured fallen dead,

I play piggy in the middle, as the bombs fly overhead.



Upon what battlefield can it be, that civilisations clash?

Not Washington or Falluja, nor New York or Baghdad;

But the blood within my body, there a war is fought,

Come East, come West, my heart hangs heavy, for a world turned mad.

And I shout from the highest rooftops, to the streets of London town,

For with their bitter hatreds, both sides have it wrong;

But when they will not listen, to a call for peace and change,

What for the blood within me, where do I belong?

Now nothing is black, nothing is white, all runs it seems to red,

While I play piggy in the middle, as the bombs fly overhead,

Just a Paki in the middle, as my people’s blood is shed.

Jaz Delorean
11-11-2004, 10:05 PM
i really like it, dude, i can tell it's very personal and something extremely close to your heart. nice one man...gonna read it again, it's very deep.
jaz

showmet
11-11-2004, 10:07 PM
I think that's the best thing I've read of yours. I particularly like the last three lines. It's nice to see you using contemporary language / slang ("Paki"), I think it works really well.

Claire
11-11-2004, 10:36 PM
I think that's the best thing I've read of yours. I particularly like the last three lines. It's nice to see you using contemporary language / slang ("Paki"), I think it works really well.
Ditto.

Love Clairexxx

Dandelion_Blood
11-11-2004, 10:47 PM
I like it too, its my favourite of the things i've read that you've writen.. i can't pin point why. I just feel its easily understood and read and seeing as i am such a simpleton - easily understood things are always top of my list :p

Taz
11-11-2004, 11:23 PM
every single line makes sense because i know exactly how u feel :)

Xiola
11-11-2004, 11:31 PM
I love it :)

moominmamma
11-11-2004, 11:46 PM
Yeah agree with everyone else .....that's my favourite so far.......the ending really works:)

Peace-Phoenix
11-12-2004, 01:30 AM
I think that's the best thing I've read of yours. I particularly like the last three lines. It's nice to see you using contemporary language / slang ("Paki"), I think it works really well.
Yeah, I hate the term Paki. I find it really quite derogatory and offensive. Naturally I'm using it with a deep sense of irony....

showmet
11-12-2004, 02:39 AM
Yeah, I hate the term Paki. I find it really quite derogatory and offensive. Naturally I'm using it with a deep sense of irony....
What? Never...:p

Peace-Phoenix
11-16-2004, 02:00 AM
I posted this on the British Poets email list, and got a reply from a guy called Gerald England asking if he could include it on his website. It was very nice of him, hopefully it may get a slightly larger readership now....


http://www.nhi.clara.net/z28.htm