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saffronfrancisburnet
10-24-2004, 12:40 AM
to all,


many ways to enter the heart,
sold the soul,tempted words
upon my head..
yet balance tilts for none.
no love will bound this follower
nor end this path we step.
yet careful progress will
correct our many footsteps...

time will allow only a second,
to reflect forgive, forget
within my head...
to play old memories again.
no line to draw ,for him to cross,
not bleeding, hung high
for death.
so timid the light of movement
fond love will hold me now....

warm sun breathe aloud and free,
unpon my heart rest,hear my beat.
no band to escort us home,
yet moon beams ,follow our suns
love and peace.....
be whole be loved be as one....



thank you not sure if this is written well
just posted my feelings again
how i veiw our change our human kind
our life world and love for all .....

saffronfrancisburnet
10-25-2004, 02:11 PM
thank you for that
beautiful reply

one drop to fill the seas of tears........

love npeace from saff.

LivinNreflection
10-25-2004, 06:27 PM
yet moon beams ,follow our suns
love and peace.....
be whole be loved be as one....
That is my favorite line! I liked it a lot. I loved the flow of your poem, it flowed well. Good job and thanks for sharing!