so i thought i'd post one of mine

[novarys]

The World Can Not Bare



Standing on air feeling invincible
Mind controlling atmosphere
Thoughts of the different,
The world can not bare.
We realize how pathetic it is
that we're the only ones to see,
When Lies become truth
and truth become lies;
What a Warped society.

Making us different
That's what they say
We say it so blunt
"Conformity sucks".
Where's the orginality,
The capablity?
They all live in paranoia
We still live in peace.
Accept the things we cannot change,
and change the things they can not see.

[TheLizardKingMike]

Pretty good. I like your style check out some of mine. I think you'll like them

[gdhmomchild]

~ I like what it says, but I'm having a bit of trouble with the rythm of it.

[saffronfrancisburnet]

to accept all and change what will bend
would be a perfect place to start in this
world of war and pain...

lovely piece

how i wish the eyes of the world would open.
would the salt of its tears bath,the dead
the living and free us from the misunderstandings
of this planet....this universe

love npeace from saff

[kidder]

Well, you can't escape conformity. Even those who don't 'conform' conform to something else. The trendy, the hip, the chic are all conformists. They're just blind to their own hypocrisy. You're right- this is a 'warped society.' But we're not the solution; we're the problem.