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rainbowkid
10-21-2004, 06:41 PM
This isn't my poem but I had to share it with everyone. It was written by Gilli Smyth of Gong, I recommend you buy one or more of her books should you have the opertunity to.
I hope I dont upset any Christians in this poem I like it and I myself am Religious so please dont get upset.

E - MAIL FROM MOST HIGH, MARKETING SECTION.


God would like to thank you for your belief and patronage,
He would like to know if there is any way he could
Improve the quality of his services to you.
Would you please rate his handling of natural disasters for example,
As Excellent,
Reasonable
Poor
Very Poor.

Please tick one of the the boxes below, and mark whetevr you would prefer
More divine intervention, or less.
It's time to look at the books
He's doing the final accounts.
Will there be a crash or a takeover?
Previous strategies have not worked, and
For a reasonable plan. As he escapes him.
He is thinking of resigning. He is tired.
He would like to spend more time with his family,
And his beautiful wife, Lilith.
They are, after all, the perfect couple.






I'm going to add my own on this thread;


INVISION TELEVISION


Looking back on myself
I'm either blind or I'm stelf
Mean or made or
Men and Maid
Which one should be made to make me?
I'll grab you and snatch you,
Like a tree, I'm in the forest with all the leaves.
Now I'm not stelf or blind or made,
I'm all around you even in the shade.
So whats inside except for the blood and guts?
What's in my heart that beats so much?
I'm not mourning or morning or moving with you
I'm seeing if I love you and what you could do.
So shall I rub out my mistakes on the paper and forget about the babies
Like on movies or the televsion and the virual rabies.

Ellied
10-22-2004, 07:55 PM
wow rainbowkid thats really profound. dead unpretentious, i like it. especailly --
I'll grab you and snatch you,
Like a tree, I'm in the forest with all the leaves.I have never heard of Gilli Smyth before. i like that poem though , i dont think the christians will get upset, show it to katey and see what she says!
love Ellie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxx:)