Suddenly castaway beyond belief

[Jaz Delorean]

a new town
a new street
i dont know the way anymore
you talk to new people
shop with new friends
gaze at new views
laugh at new jokes
and live a new life
im still me
in a different place
a long long way away
i think of you how you were
are you still like that?
the same smile
the same face
the same clothes
do you love just the same?
do you love?

is it the same sun that rises there
that i can see here
it doesnt feel like it
somehow

i went outside today
without you
sometimes i just
want
to
d
i
s
s
o
l
v
e


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oh luchi i love you so much . . .

[rainbowkid]

Cool. It's very affectionate and personnal, I like it.

[kidder]

Nice use of repetition to instill the mood here! Nice use of concrete form to solidify an um- dissolving- ending! There's a poignant, heartfelt, longing feeling in your poem and being 17, boy, can I relate! Thanks!

[Jaz Delorean]

yes, theres a poignant, heartfelt longing in my life.
thank you