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maryjaneguitargurl
10-21-2004, 07:16 AM
kill the demons that distort my path my vision of the feeling of the textures on your soft face. I get lost in this moment and i cant remember.. oblivion.. string on my finger.. smirk on your face.. who are you .. what are you.. my heart pumps out of fear to the of what you are.. your him .. no please no..

LOL i just started typing this im bored.. .. just made it up..

kidder
10-21-2004, 03:13 PM
Not bad for one tossed off as easily as that! 'Oblivion...string on my finer...smirk on your face...' More's happening there than you realize. Now what could you write if you were fully committed? Yer scaring me!

maryjaneguitargurl
10-21-2004, 10:12 PM
LOL.. I hope I dont scare you haha.. Well I was listining to a song that provoked emotion and I was thinking of creative ways to portray this person.


peace
chickens